2021年全国乙卷
第一节 短文改错 (共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加,删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线 (\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者 (从第11处起)不计分。
I love doing housework. I always assist my parents in doing the dish after meals. I also water the flowers in the yard and tidying up my own bedroom whatever necessary. In my opinion, students can benefit a lot doing some housework. Firstly, doing housework was helpful for us to be a responsible person. Also, it gives our parents more time to do what they are like and it improves the family relationship. What’s most, doing housework can be a form of mentally relaxation from study. That’s our view on housework. And hopes this can inspire more thinking on the topic!
I love doing housework. I always assist my parents in doing the dish after meals. I also water the flowers in the yard and tidying up my own bedroom whatever necessary. In my opinion, students can benefit a lot doing some housework. Firstly, doing housework was helpful for us to be a responsible person. Also, it gives our parents more time to do what they are like and it improves the family relationship. What’s most, doing housework can be a form of mentally relaxation from study. That’s our view on housework. And hopes this can inspire more thinking on the topic!
答案及解析:
1. dish → dishes
解析:doing the dish 应改为 doing the dishes,表示洗碗这一复数概念。
2. tidying → tidy
解析:and 连接两个并列的动名词,所以应将 tidying 改为 tidy,保持动词形式一致。
3. whatever → whenever
解析:根据句意,应该是在必要的时候tidy up my own bedroom,所以 whatever 应改为 whenever。
4. a lot → a lot from
解析:benefit a lot from 是固定搭配,意为“从...中受益很多”。
5. was → is
解析:全文使用的是一般现在时,所以 was 应改为 is。
6.. are like → like
解析:根据句意,应该是指做他们喜欢的事情,而like意为“喜欢”时是实义动词,前面无需加be动词所以 are like 应改为 like。
7. most→more
解析:因what’s more为固定搭配,意为“而且;另外”。解析:What’s most 应改为 What’s more,意为“更重要的是”。
8. mentally → mental
解析:relaxation 是名词,所以前面应该用形容词 mental 修饰。
9. our→my
解析:全文都是使用第一人称单数,因此此处应为“我的(my)”观点。
10. hopes→hope
解析: 本句省略了主语I,故用第一人称。